ようやく、しおらしくなってきた韓国フィギュア151

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179:氷上の名無しさん＠実況厳禁
09/03/15 22:03:20 gSWpErQb0
>>119
能力者ではありませんが少しだけ
スレチミヤネ~~

●She has had obstructed by few →by some(後の文と繰り返しになるけど)　かa few・・・
●every official practice sessions→in every official practice session(画面の切り替え上inがあった方が良いかも)
●Yu-Na Kim was very tense every practice sessions during compatisions since this season started.
was→has long been
every practice sessions→every practice session
compatisions→competitions
●This kind of things happen again and again every compatition→This kind of things happens again and again every competition
●it is hard to believe that they are just accidients.→it is hard to believe it only an accidient.

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