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NO.107 salon de 蜂子 ..

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20/09/26 22:32:21.67 3Za3skLpr.net
>>692
あと、マロエニャスの文章は抽象的すぎる。マロエニャスに足らないのはこれ。
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等位接続詞
and. or. nor. but. therefore. because. so. yet.
相関接続詞
both A and B. either A or B. neither A nor B. not only A but also B.
従属接続詞
when.whenever. every time. each time. while. before. by the time. ntil. till. after.
since. as soon as. the moment. the instant. directly. if. on condition that. supposing. in case.
as long as. unless. in order that. so that. that. est. for fear. in case. though, although.
even if. even though. while. as. as.like. as if. as though. as far as. as long as.
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主語はなんなのか？何が言いたいのか？結果はなんなのか？
「等位接続詞」「相関接続詞」「従属接続詞」
をバシッ！と使うことだ。そうすれば悪文は直る。

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